This round, I decided to do a song with my own lyrics. I had to tweak them and generate a few iterations to try and get the AI to break the lines where I wanted it to, but now that I have a better feel for tweaking my own words so it turns into a melody closer than what I think, I will do a few with my own words.

There were a few times I felt the vocals should have gone in a different direction, but as a tool to inspire a more raw, stripped versison, Suno is pretty handy. 

LYRICS

It all feels empty and meaningless now, so petty.
I walk around like a zombie with no direction.
My purpose lost as is my meaning,
I feel you slip away more every day.

Gone too far from me way too fast.
One minute you were here
and the next you had passed.

I can’t believe you’re gone.
It breaks me every day
knowing I must carry on.

I want to see your face,
Feel your presence,
even your rage –
Anything that would bring
you back to me…

To say those words I didn’t say enough,
to risk that blow-up fight
if it could have changed your mind,
made you bend to my design.

I can’t believe you’re gone.
It breaks me every day
knowing I must carry on.

All these years,
and it’s still eating me inside.
My empty heart, so heavy,
lightheaded, and disconnected.

I hear you in my mind.
I see you in my dreams.
I want to hold you in my arms once more.

I can’t believe you’re gone.
It breaks me every day
knowing I must carry on.
I must carry on.
Carry on.

-without you

Gone Too Soon